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Friday, 17 March 2017

literacy reflection week 7 term 1


This week we were learning about Shantytown. I used  a google drawing to make a dlo about Shantytown .










We also  did spine poetry . spine poetry  is a fun way to make a poem without doing any writing this is how mine turnd out  you cant really see the words so we just writ them in

4 comments:

  1. Hi Harvey,
    Its Jaxon here. I liked your poem it is funny. Maybe next time make it make sense although this is hard with book spines.

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  2. Hi Harvey its Sam. I liked your poem it is funny. Maybe next time you can use commas in your poem. Bye from Sam.

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  4. Hi Harvey,
    I really love your drawing about shantytown and all of the information but maybe next time you should put some punctuation in your writing.
    I really love your work maybe next time edit you work and make sure that your work makes sense

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