Dog on the beach
Wow! Look at all that driftwood ! there’s even some floating in the sea.the salty air caught my attention. I was a very good boy(or girl ) because i stayed close to my owner. hey what's that
black and white thing just waddling around over there.I'm running doing some parkor on the driftwood.
Hello Harvey
ReplyDeleteGreat Job what I would do is perhaps take the highlight away and change the font because I can't really read it
Maybe you could add some more sentences give the title a bigger one and check your capitals in the 2nd sentence
if you had a dog what would it be
Bye Jessie
hi Harvey you should remove the highlight from the
ReplyDeletewriting so we can see it. please change the color of the font
like blue so it will stand out great by the way job tho Harvey
please add the capitals in the sentence
By Adi
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ReplyDeleteHahahahahahahaahha nice Harv
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